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Within the night the stars arise,
the dew glistens and the wind sighs,
as shadows dance across the skies;
like the blackest of butterflies.

And beneath the moon’s silken strands
grace and beauty lie in my hands,
slipping through like the endless sands
lost forever to life’s demands.

But I just watch them drift away
lost within the dreams they portray
as throughout the night their wings sway
among the breeze in their array.

Solace lies at my finger tips
where within this life’s brief eclipse
beauty and grace befall my lips
and my heart slowly comes to grips.

As the barren limbs of my soul
bloom once more within life’s extol,
a midnight rose that dares console
the things that lie beyond control.

Faint echoes of the past take flight,
dark butterflies within the night,
they dance among the silken light
of the moon and stars, ever bright.

And the dew glistens, the wind sighs,
as the first rays of dawn arise
and stars fade from the morning skies;
as do the night’s dark butterflies.

Their black wings crimson in the sun
as the memories are un-spun
and the dreams I held come undone
as they slowly fade one by one.

Torrens Sepelio
©2005-2010 ~Torrens-Sepelio
:icontorrens-sepelio:

Author's Comments

Inspired from a number of things, including but not limited to *silent-reverie ’s deviation Night Butterflies [link] . I’m not really sure how much time I spent on this but I know it was a little longer than I would have liked. But at least it gets me back into writing after the block that I’ve been in.

The form is simple with 8 syllable lines and the ever infamous rhyme of AAAA . I hope that you all enjoy, and I look forward to your comments.

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:iconseras--victoria:
omg this is so beautiful. i feel i good fly with them. this is really amazing. going to favs.
:icontorrens-sepelio:
Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it.

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For there to be shadows there must be light, however the brighter that light becomes the deeper those shadows run.
:iconmaiden-lenore:
Wow, very lovely poem. Great write! :D Maybe you can take a look at some of my poetry? :)
:icontorrens-sepelio:
Thank you for the comment, I'm honored that you enjoyed my poem. Perhaps I'll stop by you page and looks at your poems as well. Also, thank you for the :+fav:

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For there to be shadows there must be light, however the brighter that light becomes the deeper those shadows run.
:iconnikole-nouveau:
Wow......this is....I don't even have a word. But if I did it would be a good one :giggle:. I adore it. And LOVE the ending.
:icontorrens-sepelio:
Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it.

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For there to be shadows there must be light, however the brighter that light becomes the deeper those shadows run.
:iconmasea:
i really love the first stanza... it was so pretty i didn't mind the rhyme! lol

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"Nothing can happen till you swing the bat."

"It takes an idiot to do cool things. That's why it's cool."
:icontorrens-sepelio:
Well at least you didn't mind the rhyme of the first. :D Now I've just got to work on not rhyming the rest of the time. lol j/k

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For there to be shadows there must be light, however the brighter that light becomes the deeper those shadows run.

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